Drafts and other ways to lose sleep
Apr. 18th, 2007 08:59 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Draft #1 of "Stolen" clocks in at a full 40 pages.
Pretty short for an hour, especially since large chunks of that are description, but in my head you'd need those extra two minutes or whatever for big shots of the Otherworld and to express certain concepts.
At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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I don't really want to hand this over. I don't think I can take rejection right now.
On the other hand, it's Gordon... And a waste of paper if I don't.
Sigh. Away it goes.
Pretty short for an hour, especially since large chunks of that are description, but in my head you'd need those extra two minutes or whatever for big shots of the Otherworld and to express certain concepts.
At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it.
...
I don't really want to hand this over. I don't think I can take rejection right now.
On the other hand, it's Gordon... And a waste of paper if I don't.
Sigh. Away it goes.
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Date: 2007-04-18 01:33 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-04-19 03:41 am (UTC)I bet what you wrote is awesome. :) You are brilliant!
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Date: 2007-04-19 03:44 am (UTC)Except worse.
And thank you, but I'm really not ;)
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Date: 2007-04-19 03:49 am (UTC)And if it'll make you feel better, you can always read the kind of crap I write. ;)
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Date: 2007-04-19 04:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-04-18 04:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-04-19 03:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-04-19 03:59 pm (UTC)I still have yet to send you mine. I mainly haven't yet because you seemed pretty busy as of late. Let me know when it would be a good time to toss it your way.
As always, chin up! ;)
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Date: 2007-04-19 10:39 pm (UTC)I'd like to edit mine in light of the comments given before I pass it along to you, though. OK?
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Date: 2007-04-20 03:54 pm (UTC)