Yes! :D I just fret about things sometimes, and it's nice to get second/third/fourth/fifth opinions. ;) I think I'm going to run with the story as laid out pretty much as planned, with a slightly longer downtime between the reveal/original fight and the start of Az's spiral.
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Date: 2006-06-26 08:00 pm (UTC)