Second poem for class:

So here's what I've got for my second poem for class. This one is definitely more considered than the last - I like it more, as well. But it's definitely more sexual, by which I mean if it were any more sexual I'd have said PENIS VAGINA WET DRIPPING PUSSY XXX HOT THROBBING COCK a thousand times over.

No. Really.

So it's behind a cut...

( This poem has no title yet. )

I'm not really sure I like the last two lines, but I do need something that definitively... closes it.

Er... yes. I would like comments. Even if it's just what the poem evokes for you, because I need to know if it's... evoking... properly? *gah* Kthxbai.

*hides*

Oh yeah...

In Creative Writing, only Meredith and I understand each other. XD;;;

*cling!*

No, you fools! Country! Pre-technology! Not murder!

What are you people, psychos?

XD;